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Take out my heart,
Look how I feel
Can you see the bleeding pain that aches my every waking moment?
Breathing through broken lungs and a shattered chest,
I’m broken and alone in this sea of ecstasy
I walk around with battle wounds that aren’t visible to the naked eye but felt everyday like a new knife to pierce into my chest
I cry with tears that aren’t my own brought on by a world full of pain and evil souls
Fighting my way back to the beginning when everything felt so light, free and whole
I look for a light that has long since dimmed and faded away.
The laughter of a Childhood spent and gone linger in the mist of my memories of a time more joyous
This world is a cold, dark, battlefield that no one walks away from unscathed.
©2009 ~shumuffles
:iconshumuffles:

Author's Comments

I am by no means a writer. I have no talent in that department. This is just bordom I didn't feel like drawing... something that need words.

(please tell me if you see something wrong with it like spelling or such)

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You know, for you not to be a writer, it's still a powerful piece. I'm lost on rhythm, but I love the diction you used. ^^
:iconshumuffles:
Thanks
but there's not real rhythm to it... it's ment to be said like Stones sours's song Omega (only it had more rythem ;)
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"the uppers aren't necessary the guilt is the coal that keeps the fire burning to drive out the cold
that creeps in every corner crack and never leaves you alone till the lonely messengers come calling you back home"
-Rocky Votolato
:iconsquiggiez:
OOOoooh.
That information just made it click.
=D

"Do you serve a purpose, or purposely serve?"
I've never heard of "Omega", but I like it very much.

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